December 2009

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I WROTE A SONG YESTERDAY

CLOUDY IS THE STREAM OF KNOWLEDGE THAT ONCE WAS OVER FLOWING AND PURE.

THE SUN REY'S WILL SHINE THROUGH, WILL THE SUN REY'S EVER SHINE THROUGH AGAIN.

MY HEART WAS CAPTURED AND THE CLOUDS CAME.

CAN YOU SEE THE PURITY, CAN YOU SEE THE STREAM.

SO I WROTE THIS SONG YESTERDAY, TO REVEAL MY INNER MOST HEART.

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Write to me ASAP

(Written on 15th October,2009)

[An experimental write, almost freely penned down]

My Dear Darling,

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The Invisible King

(Written on 7th December,2009)

( This is a fun-writing which I think will be easily eatable for boys and girls)

[Are you a strong devotee of God?Then please dont follow this article, you may get hurt which I dont really want.My underlying intention is never to hurt anybody, although I may fail to bring joy to one]

Demon's Brew

Bar tender, pour me another drink
For within this dank pity I wallow
Fill the whiskey full to the brink
So I can drown away my sorrow

Once, I was a man able to keep my cool
Never one for the rage to over take me
But bad times came and made me a fool
I allowed anger to always leave me empty

Come, I want you to fill my glass once again
I will be the one who decide when enough is enough
I want to swallow up when times were good, back then

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ACROSS THE RIVER BANK

 Jane is the main characters name of my short story. The name JANE rings bells of people who have read PRIDE AND PREJUDICE. Jane is a shy, introvert, loving, caring and never expressive about her miseries and always be to herself.

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Nocturnal work

The ideas coming out from the dark,
those forming as a result of darkness,
shalt be of sheer brilliance, thinking,
works of persistence, will to conquer.

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Pained transition

 Witness, a peaceful night played, uncontrolledness,

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Persistent resistance

 If given a chance to do

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Instinct theology

Of darkness, a witness thy life shalt be, such times,

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