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Submitted by lavanya b on Fri, 01/29/2010 - 01:14

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Submitted by lavanya b on Fri, 01/29/2010 - 00:38

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The Circles of Addiction

Submitted by ellabella on Thu, 01/28/2010 - 16:14

 

 

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The Apex

Submitted by giftedmum on Thu, 01/28/2010 - 04:55

Climbing, struggling I keep trudging on...
The journey before me seems ever so long
Trudging, panting I continue to tread...
My thought ringing so loud in my crowded head.....

The Mountain looms so large before me....
It's Apex...I still quite can't see....
Still....patiently I trudge on.....
Singing my "mantra' my personal song

One step, two steps here I go.....
Soon my steps start to flow...
The climb is hard...that I give you
Difficult, laborious and tedious too

But without the struggle..would I trully know.......
The sense of freedom, successes finest glow

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Inability to post Poems

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Created:sanjuthepoet at Wed, 01/27/2010 - 01:53
Status:Open (Bug / Priority Low)
Case ID:My Account: 470-1341

I have come to the site after a long time and forgotten, where to update my new poems..Please be kind enuf to let me know this..

Come Home

Submitted by ellabella on Tue, 01/26/2010 - 04:44


After the dust settles

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Thnx :)

Submitted by Reign on Mon, 01/25/2010 - 18:47

Thnx pnp team for wishing me on my  B`day.Tweety was looking cute,hehe....

 

sryy cant join u now, but i ll be ter soon

till den bbye tc.

 

 

Mr. Harry Haussen of the troubled city of Davenport

Submitted by bryllester on Mon, 01/25/2010 - 15:21




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Back to Me

Submitted by ellabella on Sun, 01/24/2010 - 09:41

I’m done with sorrow.

I’m done with pain.

I’m done with sappy love songs.

They no longer sing my name.

 

I’m free from the sadness.

I’m free from your hold.

I’m free from the misery.

My thoughts you no longer control.

 

I’m feeling some joy.

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meetin on cloud 9

Submitted by kalvins_a_panda on Sat, 01/23/2010 - 02:55

 i thought the sky had fell, i had gazed so long

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