May 2010

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Light of the path

 

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The Kite

 I hold it within my tightened grasp....

I hold the string .....my hands clasped

The Kite....

The Journey......Life's Flight

 

Completely enveloped by the winds

A majestic Angel....With Open Wings

Fly ....sweet Kite......Fly

You have the freedom to soar incredibly high.......

 

The sun shines upon your beauty.....Perfection

Within your beauty I see my reflection

Oh to be a kite & fly as you do.....

Within the clouds...the sky so blue

 

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All of this....




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The truth and the fact is...

I lay alone in my bed at night, with spirits in battle. The evil attacking and the Holy protecting. My thaughts are a confused somtimes, not because Im confused, but , because confusion wants to destroy me. The truth and the fact is, I am a straight hetralsexual male and I cant seem to find a straight hetralsexual woman. I lay in my bed at night, hoping and thinking about, this woman it seems will never come. The truth and the fact is, I believe that ther are some honest, carring, loving, righteous women out ther.

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Maple leaf (Haiku)

 a maple leaf

dried and faded

old memories

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Shadow

Shadow creeps over my soul

to chew up my flesh and blood

I surrender myself into it's arms

losing myself in it's charm

I feel the warmth of mesmerizing fate

the touch of devil so lubricate 

swallowing my heart with ease

with it's intense fiery kiss

trapped in tentacles vigor

embracing my skin with adore

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I am Free

I was thinking about writing something for the blog for some time but whenever I tried, I got bogged down by the shear weight of my disorganized thoughts. Those thoughts are an assets to me, I can not afford to loose those. Because those thoughts are intimately connected with pleasures and sorrows that I have experienced during the short excursion into what people call practical life.

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Shape of My Heart

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'from your son', a freestyle

 Its not my fault for bein born

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~*~AS I WAIT~*~

  As I Wait ......                

        I wait and watch ...
Looking around at what surrounds....
Waiting to see where this takes me once again , finding true real bliss and realize there are good people.
there is way more to this insanity, paths that take me ways THAT ARE  more..
     I had no intentions of finding the one i

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