August 2010

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I HAVE FOUND BEAUTY

I have laid with the most beautiful woman, last night.

The smell of her silky soft skin has possessed me.

I want to throw myself head first, into an passionate love affair.

Her lips are like the petals of a rose, sweet to the smell and soft to the touch.

The subtle but aggressive heat coursing thru our bodies as we lay entwined in erotic stimulation,

has my heart captured in love.

I have found beauty.

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Blue Persuasion

  You could never know the way the 
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Untitled 50

 When everything is gone, no one else left

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Infinity

Rebuilt- Tower of Babel 

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but...

Today
Again few drops poured
Not from the sky
But from my eyes

I cried
Not because what I’ve lost
But because I’ve got
What I loved the most

I’m dwelling on history
Not to crib about tearful stories
But to dig my childhood glories

I’m defying my mind
Not to think about whom I adored
But because I’m holding
what I was actually longing for

I’m holding back myself
Not to suppress my feelings

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wildfire

The flames galloped wit a quick sprint
Leavin nothin in its shadow but imprints
Makin ashes of everything in me that didn't fit
N dazzlin all that is significant
Like the style of my love, a signature in cursive
Vindicated on the hearts, some souls who've earned it
To preserve them from this scaldin marchin
These adverse times have brought upon me
Without warning... made my vision smokey
This rollin fog shows the unknowing me
Maybe holds who I'm supposed to be

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Natural gemstones of life

Earth’s natural gemstones thunder down
Miriards of multi sized scattered diamonds tumbling
trained jewels, beads, roll down roof glazing
Tiny shards of light begin to bounce, dance and reflect magnificantly
At first twinkles of days sunlight peep from behind storm clouds
Enters sunrise, day breaks
Vast darkness of night-times tears quickly disperse
evaporating to the brighter warmer climate
Nature’s tears are quickly dried
Outside still few mirrors remain reflecting the skies and beauty

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