September 2010

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Luka and the Fire of Life - Review

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Myself

Heavy mind,
Heart heavy.
Thoughts dried,
clogged and blurred.
My plight to fight
the deadlocked night,
an enemy so familiar;
myself!

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Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Language: 
English
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A rural-Indian school

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PoemsnProse user BeulahSNOW27 is leaving spam comments on The Song of Makeda

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Created:Sara L Russell at Sun, 09/26/2010 - 15:41
Status:Open (General Task / Priority Normal)
Case ID:Other - Report abuse: 473-1561
Last modified:Sun, 03/13/2011 - 00:55

Hi Amartya,

Just to let you know that user BeulahSNOW27 is a completely bogus user who has been repeatedly leaving spam on my poem The Song of Makeda, some of which I deleted. I have left the latest spam comment there so that you can see it. This will be one of 2 cases reporting such spam users, who should be deleted as they don't contribute anything, they have no buddies on here and post nothing but spam.

Thanks, Sara.

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About my tweet

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My tweet

My tweetI've more reasons to be ashamed of India than to be proud of! attracted a bit of an outrage, with some demanding to know the reasons. I promised to base my next blog post on it, so here we go!

The Search

 Tear apart my chest and write love poems on my soul. You are the one, the one that will play the role, the role in my game, a game called make me whole. All of my life. I’ve been waiting, waiting all this time. My heart pours a potion, a potion to tie you in, into my motion, rocking along but never The Game of back and forth, just an endless ocean, of uncompromising bliss. Take this kiss.

Style / Type: 
freeform
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
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English
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Know your enemy - Taliban

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Preface:

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Know your enemy - Taliban - Incomplete ...

Preface:

First of all, I'm not against Islam (or any other religion for that matter) and Muslims because we are all equal human beings and therefore have both the right and the duty to share the earth and it's resources equally and in peace. Yes, but I'm proudly and unequivocally against radicalism; from any community, creed, religion, society, country or any other entity.