Haiku - Flee

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A fear wells inside /
Panic set in motion now /
Mind and body flee
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hmmm diffrent conclusions

 Haiku originates difefrent emotions and i liked this style coz it leaves a challege to the reader to dwell his imagination and bring up different views of those three incredible lines.

 

About your poem few of my imaginations ,

- I remembered runaway bride.

- The game with tug of war ending and something happens and the player having most expectations fleeing frm the game.

- Couple who cant extend relationchip of sudden pani of responsibility.

-During war and so on.

 

Nice to see haiku frm dragonblogger.

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Thank You

I write dozens of Haiku's on Associated Content:

http://www.associatedcontent.com/user/434644/justin_germino.html

Put some on my blog as well, but what I like about Haiku's is trying to tell a story or express an emotion in the limited 17 syllables you have.  I will publish more Haiku's here if they are well received.

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will try to read

 i wolud love to read more

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