Never ends perfect
written on jan 18,2009.
SCENE 1:
Aamra gets up from her bed with a bad dream and hastens towards her mothers bed room.Holds her mother tight and slips into a peacful sleep.In the morning.she enters into a dispute with her mom about increasing her allowances,movie nights and other issues which teenagers usually complain about.Aamra gets a straight and stern NO from her mother and she stabs the bowl of breakfast on the dining table and eats her food distastefully.
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SCENE 2:
As she grows up her feelings towards her mother turn to sour side(AAMRA'S MOM AND DAD WERE SEPARATED DURING HER CHILDHOOD AND AAMRA GREW UP WITH A MISCONCEPTION THAT HER MOTHER WAS REAL REASON FOR HER FATHER LEAVING THEM). She grew up into indeed into a successful business woman who never allowed her mother to be one of her closest persons to share her feelings of happiness,rejoice,sadness and problems.
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SCENE 3:
One day she receives a call from a hospital that her mother is admitted in a hospital and she was counting her time for life and her last wish was to meet her daughter.Aamra drops her phones receiver in perfect silence and runs in urgency to meet her dying mother. When she sees her mother lying on the hospital bed with a face showing tiredness of her struggle she had fought upon throughout her life,work and pain she experienced in her whole life in upbringing of her life support(her child). Her mothers last spoken words "I LOVE YOU MY CHILD FROM MY HEART" and with these words she drops into eternity silence still on the bed with a smile and happiness in her glowing face with an expression of fulfilling the purpose of her life has been accomplished. This sudden blow to Aamra makes her to think of mistakes and misconceptions she had developed and these all things pierces her soul like a spear.
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SCENE 4:
After some days Aamra is playing with kids of orphanage and smiling at them and tears flow from her eyes shining as perals on her cheeks.She looks into the pool of water in which she observes her mothers impression which was blur turned into clear one now.It was a penance for her deeds for neglecting and misunderstanding her mothers LOVE towards her by giving her love towards her mother to these children.
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I END THE STORY WITH A HOPE OF NEVER TRY TO CONCEDE OR EXPRESS YOUR FEELINGS EVEN THEY ARE BAD OR GOOD TO THAT PERSON AND TRY NOT GROW ENVY TOWARDS ANY PERSON AND HAVE A PEACEFUL LIFE AND END IN A SATISFACTION OF ACHEVING SOMETHING AND LOVE FROM OTHERS.
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Hi
Good Thought..... A very important message....
I hope the readers take it very seriously :) Good Work
thanx priya
thatnx dear ur comments mean alot to me.