wild life of fantasies[continuation]

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 She was a rebel,submissive,thinker and off track person. She lived in her privacy and solemn thoughts ,like a kite left in winds to  sweep  clouds and enjoy it without any sense of what is going around her. Life was always content to her but she was ambitious and greedy to know as much as she can get exposed. As there is difference between watching and seeing things through our eyes. That was the difference she experienced while watching a movie or seeing the surroundings while travelling. The perspective of thinking differed even though she was among the common thinkers.

 

She  used to enjoy the night stroll on the road late night returning from her classes. It was approximately about a 1Km walk but it was an awesome walk. A short distance but a lot experiences to be gathered by her senses. Her imagination sprung up from the core by making way through layer by layer. As she always took the left lane on the way, a street bulb used to flicker a lot. This was an invitation to her imaginative prospect to fly in an open sky.

It was an odd timing for the light which used to be lifeless as if something has sucked its life. But as she walked towards  it ,suddenly use to sprang up into full life as a flower blooms on seeing an honey bee. It used to suck off light emitted by it when she passed away the street light. At first she was frightened but as it happened most of the times while she tend to cross the lane where that  street light stood like a gaint. Her imaginations creeped up as fire creeps by eating the log thrown in it. she speculated  herself to a lady who spelt a magic on a guy and he was dragged towards her. Assuming the street light to the guy who was desperately in love with her.

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                                 {THE IMAGINATION}

She was walking past him as usual without noticing him but something flickered in desperation as if to be noticed by her. Her gaze turned towards a figure who was standing in the shadows of light. The clouds covered the bright moon as if they were letting him to enjoy the surprise and fear in her eyes which turned to a stubbornness to fight against the rouge if at all he tries to hurt her. He thought that it was the real reason for which he was more pulled towards her. She pretended as if she hasn’t noticed him and continued her pace towards her home. Something made her to retreat her steps back to him .it might be his heart beat which strated to bang as if its going to broke those ribs and get out.It might be the drumming of his heart beat which was audible in dead silence of night which made her to come back to the place where he was standing.Their eyes met each other. He slowly moved from the shadow allowing her to enjoy looking him. Time seemed to be cease while seconds turn to minutes and she realizes herself being pulled towards him.  

 

He was heavily built and he never walked but paced and glided as if floating just inches above the ground in air. The shirt was wet by heavy perspiration revealing his body line and it was implying that he was channel swimmer or someone who wasn’t fragile. The knowledge of his being strong made her feel safe and time slept slowly and she realized she is going to fall off the cliff ,realizing it she  started to turn and walk past him. But her legs were too  numb to move and their eyes were saying may things but fate had something else stored While he was watching her she gathered her left out senses and walked away.

 

IT was an uneasy feeling but somewhere it ignited passion and was revealing some hidden emotions which she never knew in he exsisted and even they tried to get out she suppress them by pretending them as a ridicule.  The next morning was as usual for her with a diffrnt hope,may be to meet him again and she was desperate to see him again. As if GoD has listened to her she saw him again that night .Air surrounding them became chilled and warmed up by their burning passion for each other.She left without speaking a word.

 

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Malik Ismail's picture

You were caught up

your story kept me reading so I marked it as okay but it could have been better with the way your imagination stop at a point were I felt it should have opened up . speak ,good story.

Malik Ismail

thanx

 yes ur right sometimes my imagination doesnt go beyond when evryone hope for more i shuld pick things alot but will try to make it more better.

thanx for ur advice sir.