Alone in The Hallways and Who Is This Person

NinaAbbysays's picture

Alone In The Hallways
Sitting in the hallways
So alone, so cold
But then people come moving quickly
Like the people in Time Square
Or at a fair
But just as they came
They’re gone again
And I’m all alone again
Just me and the lockers

Who Is This Person

Help me
Save me from this beast
It has taken me
From who I wanted to be
Help me
Save me from this monster
It has me by the throat
Not letting me break free
Help me
Save me who is this person
Who is afraid of who I really am
All I want is to be free

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prema_nair's picture

hi

wow i loved these.....

i liked 'alone in the hallways' better though

i get the feeling very well and it has so much simplicity (which is it beauty) that any person reading it can relate very well to it

gud job

Keep writing

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NinaAbbysays's picture

thank you

I wrote Alone in the Hallways when I was a freshman or sophmore in high school.

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