"I just wanna live while I'm alive 'Cause it's my life"
Its my life
and why do I have to go to college?
why can't I just be a self proclaim philosopher?
I just wanna live and watch the "days go by"
We only get one life to live
and then we go into the afterlife
and have to start a whole new different life
So lets live this life the way we want
and when we go into the afterlife we can all catch up with each other.
Because in the afterlife,
where this life is dead and gone
Our spirits will still be there and meet everyone from this life,
while in the next life we are creating a whole new different life
And then we will just repeat,
like a broken record
as the world comes crumbling down.
Let's just live in the moment and everything will be fine.
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hi
I'm sure each one of us at different phases of our lives wanted to break free and do just WHAT THEY FEEL LIKE
Your poem speaks for all of them... good job.
I think the last line should have been with the previous paragraph to maintain the design of the poem... but if its ur choice, thts the best
thank you
yeah well the last line has space between everything else so its just saying we should live how we want too and don't let others tell you what to do.
when I wrote it, I just wrote it without really thinking about it. That's my style of writing. I don't really edit it, just the spelling because I can be really bad at spelling.
a lot of people don't really like my style because they're not use to it and they kept telling me to do edits, but that's not me.