Imaginations...

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Imaginations...

 

      The meaning of imagination is the formation of a mental image of something that is neither perceived as real nor present to the senses is imagination. It is an unrealistic idea or notion.

 

      It can be in many ways like i can see what the eyes cannot see. I can hear what the ears cannot hear. I can feel what the heart cannot feel. Imagination can rule the world.

 

If less would be more then

More would be less..

 

If aeroplanes sail under water then

Ships fly up in the sky...

 

If rich would be poor then

Poor would be rich..

 

If I would be you then

You would be me..

 

 

          Imagine yourself with a million dollars

Imagine yourself with a pure gold ring

           Imagine yourself meeting your true love

Imagine yourself without your imagination

Is it possible??

 

Imagine there's no heaven

It's easy if you try

No hell below us

Above us only sky...

 

If you had no imagination

You'd have no inspiration...

So always imagine in your life

Anything whether its a good thing or a bad thing..

 

 

 

 

 

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hi

good thought mentioned about imagination but you have given so much space between the sentences. Were you writing more on that?? nice keep writing ur realy inproving a lot reema good...

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Reign's picture

@Reema

Hi!! encouraging stroke !!! Wat to lost in imagine gud?Infact its gain if we concentrate on our imagination it is gonna be true in future definately.Most of d researches done based on imagination..dis kind of poems inspires us to do sumthing different nd learn to live happy.

 

Gud work!!

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reema's picture

hi

thank you i liked ur thought about my imagination and wht u said was true...

Reema

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ghayal_shayar's picture

hmm c my reply...

first commnet... 

If you had no imagination

You'd have no inspiration...

So always imagine in your life

Anything whether its a good thing or a bad thing..

i am inspired by this stanga. but the title of poem is not attractive.. title cant attract people to read the poem... tile should be attractive.. i sugges title of this poem World of Imaginations or Ohh Imagination Yaa Imagination. well u r good writer nd u have good quality all the best reema

 

again m saying u Tear is Dear.. Smile Have to wear..

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1 more suggestion reema

Anything whether its a good thing or a bad thing.

This line should be like this.. Imaginations give us hope nd progressive Life

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reema's picture

hello

hi thanks for correcting my mistake and i vil implement on this in future thank you dear.. bt i hope that u vil enjoy my other poems also which are really interesting..

Reema

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 The meaning of imagination

 The meaning of imagination is the formation of a mental image of something that is neither perceived as real nor present to the senses [is imagination].

redundant - is imagination

 

 

The meaning of imagination is the formation of a mental image of something that is neither perceived as real nor present to the senses is imagination. It is an unrealistic idea or notion.

It can be in many ways like i can see what the eyes cannot see. I can hear what the ears cannot hear. I can feel what the heart cannot feel. Imagination can rule the world.

I found inconsistency in thoughts in the above stanzas.

  1. Imagination is unrealistic
  2. it rules the world

Unrealistic ideas (in my opinion) cannot rule anything.

But if i understood the thought well then i would rather put it this way..

Imagination is the output if a perceived notion. It can be as beautifully meaningful as God's creation or as unrealistic as the devil's den.

Action starts with imagination and thus it rules the world.

Just an opinion. Poetry is like a painting; as long as the artist likes it, its good. What the rest of the world imagines about it is as meaningless as the devil's den. 

Respectfully,
Amartya

 

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Amratya i am not agree with u

coz No Dream... No Life... sapne nahi dekhoge to use pura karne kee koshish kaise karoge

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Hi

My fav lines

If you had no imagination

You'd have no inspiration...

So always imagine in your life

 

Someone once said "Imagination is the preview of life's coming Attractions"

Your poem reminds me of how important it is to imagine good things in life...

I truly believe if you make it a habit to imagine and expect good things... You are bound to get those in life....

I like all the topics that you pick for poems..... Good Going... Implement some of amartya's feedback.. and u are on your way to become a cool poetess....

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HI

this is also sweetly written .. great reema ur poems are so simple and nice.. i feel interesting while reading it..

 

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thankx

thank you priya and patrick i really respect ur comments thank you..

Reema..

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