simple and nice reema .,keep writing good one

thank you.. wait for my next write.

reema.

Hey Reema

really nice......so simple yet powerful

use some simple word its sounding good.. hard word nt for poems..

very sweetly written reema good one

a good piece of poetry which you have presented here, ah we all find ourselves in troubled waters at times, and faith gives us hope and hope lifts us from the dark tides. :)

THANKX DEAR ....

REEMA.

thats a real nice one,

optimism and hope are the two major lamps in the gloomy path of life,,,,,,

god does just the same work more than anything

he gives us the hope that there is someone who cares for me.....

ones again a great right,

thanks for the experience,

falcon.

OHHHHH THANKX FALCON... FOR UR COMMENT..

REEMA.

Nice views and truth in your words Reema. Always, Gary La Buda

Nice views and truth in your words Reema. Always, Gary La Buda

 nice piece.. Congrats.. its hit the top 5.. nice// :)

Amartya

wow nice write.. good one..

thank you patrick for reading my poem.. thankx..

Reema....

it went  straight to my heart . very well written keep it up

thank you for commenting on my poem.. i really appreaciate..

Reema..

Excellent!

Joe

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh thankx atlast i got the excellent word from you...

Reema..

I will always be truthful with you, Reema.  My comments are sincere and meaninful, dear friend.

Joe

i knw joe thts why i need your comments as u have commented the first time to some of my poems.. nd thank you for that .. do always.. so i can improve more better...

Reema..

Hi Reema, very nicely written...there seems to be a perfect combination of a poet and philosopher in you..kudos!! 

hellooooo thankx for your lovely comments dear..

Reema.

It brings to mind that we all face troubling times indeed seeking for a greater power to relieve us of our vast tribulations. Good use of imagery here. Nice to see a steady storyline. Simple yet very effective in conveying the message. In the instance in which you thought "I am dead" and then later realized that you were still very much alive makes this piece very captivating. Five out of Five. An excellent piece. Please write more.

Your friend,

Chase

(MrNEVERLIED) 

hi thank you so much for your comments dear..

Reema..

thankx dear i am happy you enjoyed my write.. thank you..

Reema..

Hello Reema:

I enjoyed reading your poem. We all suffer "Dark nights of the Soul". You writting was simple and elegant. Please keep sharing.

Bill Pappy Ferrara

A wonderful write, with sentiment of hope.

thank you even your writes are very nice i have commented to them..

Reema..

Awesome

Reflections of how the time stream effects life, a very beautifully crafted poem my friend. An instant classic

thank you so much for your comment dear.. i really appreaciate u for it..

Reema..

a good write but i cant get the rhythm. no rhymes,   well its tough to write poems without rhymes thats good but one should be in a flow of words

great write!

this touched me, Reema.  Very good poem!  I wish I was inspired to write about the good in life, but i am not, so I enjoy very much when I see others grasp it so completely as you do and convey it so beutifully.  Simplicy in writing is a greater scope of the whole thought in my opinion.  For all, even the layman, can see and understand truthes that are so pure as the one you write about.  It is universal, my dear.  Truly inspiring!  :)

SA

nice