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LIFE...

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Submitted by reema on Mon, 10/12/2009 - 21:06

 

LIFE...

 

Life is difficult

Life is rough

The word “NO”

Makes life tough...

 

Life is a turbulent river

Washing over the human race

Quelled only by acceptance

The spirit of success

Life is simple “YES”

Life is beautiful

When it comes knocking on your door

Say “YES” to it

And nothing more...

 

Life without difficulties

Is like an ocean

Without its fishes

Life without happiness

Is like the beach

Without its shells

How can we experience happiness

Without difficulties??

And that's the way life is...

 

 

REEMA..

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nice

Submitted by patrick on Mon, 10/12/2009 - 21:12.

Nice description given reema about life.. very well written i enjoy reading it  good show...

 

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thankx

Submitted by reema on Mon, 10/12/2009 - 21:36.

thank you patrick i really felt happy that you enjoyed my rite..

Reema.

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hey

Submitted by chocolate on Mon, 10/12/2009 - 21:21.

hey reems very nice.. i loved all the 3 para of your write.. beautiful and yes truly mentioned about life..

 

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thankx

Submitted by reema on Mon, 10/12/2009 - 21:38.

thank you dear for your lovely comments..

Reema.

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Congrat!!!

Submitted by ghayal_shayar on Mon, 10/12/2009 - 21:56.

Finally u got rythm Congrat Deee.. the best one for me

When it comes knocking on your door

Say “YES” to it

And nothing more

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hey

Submitted by reema on Mon, 10/12/2009 - 21:57.

hey thankx bro.. i really liked ur comments..

Reema..

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its cool yaar 100% truth

Submitted by Icycool on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 00:23.

its cool yaar 100% truth reflected in these words

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Excellent!!

Submitted by catlover12de on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 01:14.

 I can't find a better way to describe life. That is so true and your wording is absolutely perfect. Keep it going.

 

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thankx

Submitted by reema on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 01:16.

thankx dear for your lovely comments... thank you...

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Very nicely done, Reema! Joe

Submitted by joe on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 02:16.

Very nicely done, Reema!

Joe

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thankx

Submitted by reema on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 02:27.

thankx joe really appreaciated... dear,...

Reema..

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nice and mature..

Submitted by amartya on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 04:15.

hey its cool.. :)

Rating.. 5/5

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hi

Submitted by reema on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 17:46.

thankx amartya and rating 5/5 thank you so much my sweto...

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wow

Submitted by sanjuthepoet on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 03:24.

I must say...wasnt wrong about the philosopher part in you...you have explained the complexity of life in such a subtle way....cool i must say.. 

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hi

Submitted by reema on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 17:47.

thankx sanjuthepoet i really felt happy for ur lovely comments and compliments dear...

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Life is.

Submitted by Malik Ismail on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 04:11.

I enjoyed it Reema, I would like you to revisit and update this poem from time to time because life goes on .

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hi

Submitted by reema on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 17:48.

yes life just goes on and on so we should always enjoy it.. thankxx

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hey reema once more a really

Submitted by falcon on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 11:33.

hey reema once more a really cheerful and lively poem... it truely showed all true shades f life... life is incomplete without every shade, every feeling, emotion of it...

again a brilliant write,

thanks for the experience,

falcon.

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hi

Submitted by reema on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 17:49.

helloooooooo falcon thankx for the comments.. and how ru after so lonfg time dear...

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hey

Submitted by vinita_rk on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 14:17.

hey reema,

great poem.. i follow what everybody has been saying about it.. its true, its fact, its life.. and you have described it well- not too lengthy, not too short.. and the rhyme jus makes it more colorful.

good work!

 

vini

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 Nice work, Reema. Very

Submitted by MolokoPlusVellocet on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 16:00.

 Nice work, Reema. Very heartfelt and positive! :0)

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hi

Submitted by reema on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 17:50.

hi thankx dear and i really appreaciate for reading it..

Reema..

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 what shall i say! spendid!

Submitted by ratnaprabha r raykar on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 17:32.

 what shall i say! spendid! can i call it life in a nutshell?

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hi

Submitted by reema on Tue, 10/13/2009 - 17:51.

hmmmm whtever u think it ratnaprabha its life so we should always make it cheerful...and thankx dear...

Reema..

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