Will u be mine?

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I need to know if you’re my true friend,
will you be by my side until the end?
Can I tell you my secrets deep,
and trust them in your heart you’ll keep?
We are neither of us without our flaws,
can you accept mine as I will yours?
I’ll be a shoulder to cry on when you’re blue,
will you be there for me when I need you?
No matter how busy I will make time for you,
if you are busy will you make time for me too?
I will take your hand and comfort your tears,
will you hold me and soothe my fears?
I will give you joy and many warm smiles,
can we share that even across many miles?
I will not forget what’s important to you,
will you remember what’s important to me too?
With you my most favourite things I’ll share,
If only I know do you truly care?
If you can accept me as I do you,
then I will know you are a friend most true.

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Hi...

This is the kind of poems I like to read.... Simple and coming straight from heart....

Well done... I'm definitely gonna ask MY FRIENDS to read it...

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Reign's picture

Hi

THNK U SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH.......

m really happy for ur valuable comment......

 

i also lyk dis kinda stuff:)

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kitu_1602's picture

hey LL!!!!!!!!

grt job yaar..........really awesome......

 

really nice LL...

keep it up....

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Hey KB!!!

Thnk u so much KB.....u know m so surprised!!!!u read my blog!!!!!!!!!!OMG........

nd most apparently u also like it ..... thnk u so much Kit for ur comments....KB

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gud one indeed

i just have to be my frnds consoler nw i m unable to see her like this and i can only pray fr her plz frnds pray fr my frnd her to get out her prblm.

 

Regards,

lavanya 

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@ reign

 Thats a beautiful poem, written in simple words with a great deal of meaning in it.. certainly a poem to be read by all friends.. 

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@feather

Thnx rock for ur valuable compliments!!!

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I like the writing and the

I like the writing and the style. While sweet and soft, there is also an element of neediness, like you give only to receive. 

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