AAj KA MAUSAM
badalonse chim chim kartey motiyan barsney lagi,
usney unsarey motiyon ko sanjogna chahaan,
pehli barish ki chah bujah hi nahi uske mann mein.
aayi wo hawa ki jokey ke tarah,
par badalon ko use bigona nahi ta turantt,
wo barsey aur rukey,
uski daat sunn kar hastey fir barsney lagey,
khel ban kar badal barsa aur ruka.
uski choti muskrahatt se
wo pigla aur moti jaisey aasman se gira,
aur choo liya uske hoton ko.
jannat mili dononko.
Hawa to jalke garam hui
barish ke behlane aur fuslane par
fir se tand padgayi.
use chu kar san san kartey
dheemi dheemi barish ki kushbu
chodkar chalne lagi.
dheemi dheemi barish ki kushbu
chodkar chalne lagi.
Style / Type:
freeform
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TELUGU VERSION
megalon nunchi doosukostu mutyalu kuravatam chusi,