Us
We are but a speck of dust
to the dust, the earth,
in the Universe
Style / Type:
Japanese
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Is the internal logic consistent?
Language:
English
amartya is this
amartya
is this hailku? i too am fascinated by it
ratnaprabha
:)
Yes it is :)
Amartya