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Submitted by Ammadeena Sheppard on Sat, 10/31/2009 - 00:58

Have I ever
made you feel
like you deserve to feel?

Have I ever
said the words
I really meant to say?

Have I ever
done anything at all
to deserve your love?

 

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catlover12de's picture

Good job.

Submitted by catlover12de on Sat, 10/31/2009 - 03:01.

 That was pretty good. However, I feel it ended too soon. Keep up the good work though.

Simple yet profound

Submitted by Newsage on Sat, 10/31/2009 - 03:03.

 I enjoyed the simplicity and also the depth of this piece. Very often to reach deepness one doesn't have to be complicated. Excellent :)

good

Submitted by Lolz on Sat, 10/31/2009 - 03:06.

it was really good

but kinda short =)

i agree

Submitted by lavanya b on Sat, 10/31/2009 - 11:52.

 I agree with catlover it ended too soon but somethings r having great impressions when they r kept short and i loved it those questions were having deep emotions in them.

 

welldone

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..and I considered this one

Submitted by Ammadeena Sheppard on Sat, 10/31/2009 - 14:33.

..and I considered this one of my "lesser" poems, as I hardly ever write love poetry anymore. I sort of feel that there are too many of those out there already.

But I suppose, occasionally, we all feel the need to write one.