again
Falling down hard and getting back up
again and again and again
Scarred through the heart, skinned to the bone
Holding on to the dream you can always go home
Feeling the pain
again and again and again
Inside of the fear there's a hope for a change
Down you go, up you get
Again and again and again
Here's a sad story, a heartache, tears for your trouble
Prayers you can't speak
Worries hidden behind masks
Squeezing out promises for truths
A circle of circus rings round
Tomorrow secure in it's lies
Falling, wounding, healing, time
Again and again and again
Style / Type:
freeform
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Language:
English
(1 vote)





hi
Persuasion is the key to success…. Keep it going…Nice Write
Intensity
Hi Priya ! How are you?
I loved your write up to begin with.
The title is apt.
Talking about intensity , the poem hits your head and heart really hard, knocks it well but I feel the way you ended it made it little subtle in approach whereas you built the foundation of a cracker throughout.
But I love it anyway, good job!
keep going :)