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Falling down hard and getting back up

again and again and again

Scarred through the heart, skinned to the bone

Holding on to the dream you can always go home

Feeling the pain

again and again and again

Inside of the fear there's a hope for a change

Down you go, up you get

Again and again and again

Here's a sad story, a heartache, tears for your trouble

Prayers you can't speak

Worries hidden behind masks

Squeezing out promises for truths

A circle of circus rings round

Tomorrow secure in it's lies

Falling, wounding, healing, time

Again and again and again

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freeform
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Language: 
English
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hi

Persuasion is the key to success…. Keep it going…Nice Write

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Intensity

Hi Priya ! How are you?

I loved your write up to begin with.

The title is apt.

Talking about intensity , the poem hits your head and heart really hard, knocks it well but I feel the way you ended it made it little subtle in approach whereas you built the foundation of a cracker throughout.

But I love it anyway, good job!

keep going :)

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