Crapulence
Her voice resonated from across the room
Staccato and high-pitched
Style / Type:
freeform
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Language:
English




Very, very interesting
Very different. I like it. it was good.
keep up the good work.
Love and Peace
thanks!
i actually sent a copy of this to our campus paper, but i don't think it's that good to be published.
Thanks for the critique! This is actually my first time writing a poem, sans the school-related assignments.
No problem.
I started really writing poetry after I took a poetry class my sophmore year of high school.