Arisen
To the ground my body shall go
But to the heavens my soul shall flow
To Satan an empty vessel i bestow
alas my spirit has risen to god alone
god my father
Jesus my savior
Satan the destruct-or
this is how i will go
weep for me not for i weep for you
for you alone with the grace of god will bear the burden alone
but god will fill your heart with love and a ringing from above
The sound of rejoice that will ring aloud for all to hear
weep for me not, for i weep, i weep for you
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I LOVED the shape
Jon,
Yeah! this is VERY much of what i really like... Yep... definately...
My favorate lines:
"weep for me not for i weep for you
for you alone with the grace of god will bear the burden alone
but god will fill your heart with love and a ringing from above
The sound of rejoice that will ring aloud for all to hear
weep for me not, for i weep, i weep for you"
I think other members should draw a lesson from this poem... Shape plays a MAJOR factor in expression of emotions. Very well done my friend...
"Weep for me not for I weep for you" - How true... Could not have expressed it better myself...
Respectfully,
Amartya
Hey... Congrats on the spotlight... :)
huh
what spotlight?????
oh yeah
the cool thing i noticed about this poem i like to tell the readers, after i wrote it look at the poem as a whole notice it looks like an angel pretty cool huh
Thank god you noticed....