My life, My love, and The Night Sky

on the brightest of nights
stars light the sky
underneath the willow tree we lay
starring at the sky side by side with the love of my life
by candle light Divine i proclaim my love
in the corniest way i can think of
peanut butter a jelly sandwiches and a telescope to look above
i know I'm not the best i answered in grief
but i love you so much so dear, that no other could
my life with you is a life lived for the good

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jack the ripper's picture

wow

Jon,

This is truly awesome.You write differently but well and often very well...

This poem made me feel like falling in love again...

Regards,
Amartya

PS: I want to know you better... who are you my friend?

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who i am

my name is jon campbell im trying to become a christian writer for god when i was 13 i prayed one night that god would tell me what he wanted me to do for him, that night when i fell asleep i dreamed the simple things poem and i awoke and wrote it all down i then realized he gave me a gift and that i can share him to others in this special way so ive been writeing ever since now im 21 and my book is finished i just need to get it published, my place of life is in the good ole habersham county, GA  as the local southerners say but ill be the first to correct you in that im not too southern and far from the broodish ways of the "rednecks" lol but whatever you want to know im an open book im dealing with a devorce as i was just medically discharged from the army as well so god is keeping me alive liveing in my car and going to work right know but i love the independence because im makeing it somewhere in life know 

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prema_nair's picture

hey

the precious moment was so wonderfully described. it would have been nice if you woud have let us all know her response.   was very sweet though.

thanks,

Prema

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