No help?
declaration to devastation
political uprising to global downsizing
church and state not worth the slate
a centrifuge for all to see yet complicated beyond no end
heard but not headed
spoken but no action
take a chance be the lance
the spear of ease new beginings start with one word god
the one we look to beyond a doubt
when all is lost he'll be the stout
our sheild when we are weak against sinners in vain
the sword and sheath agianst all that shall mane
the mana of all life that lives
he is the one true warrior the greatest of entities
the one and only the only one
(2 votes)
Cakewalk
You are right... God gives us hope and may be even help... Being an atheist i believe that faith starts where logic ends (i.e. where there exists the unknown). For them who derive strength from the almighty he is the greatest worrier. I love your thought process. I think we are almost of the same wave length (trust me, it's a dangerous statement ).
Again a few suggestions though (these are just suggestions and nothing more; the write otherwise is legible enough for me):
1) "political uprising to world downsizing"
"political uprising to [global] downsizing"
2) As I noted before (in one of your previous writes) please try and break down your sentences. I'm not sure about others but i definitely had to read some of your line more than once to understand.
Just these two for now...
Respectfully,
Amartya
thanks
the only prob is all of these have already been copyrighted at the library of congress
Oh! it's a shame then :)
Cakewalk,
It's a shame because we cannot collaborate and change these then
... Too bad...
Hope these are copyrighted on your name... cuz otherwise it's a felony... Hope you know it...
Respectfully,
Amartya