Take A Stand
Here we go again
hopeing for prayers in a life of sin
just waiting for nostalgia to break in
and then my friend here we go again
when worlds collide
Angels and Demons fight
our soul is the prize
paveing the way for our demize
but a ray of light
lets us know we have won the fight
yet demons still reside in our core
we must stand up and fight
for we have not yet won the war
(4 votes)
Cakewalk
Welcome back... Where have you been? We have been missing you...
About your poem:
This is a nice Yin Yang poem. Fighting the two elements within oneself is always interesting. I liked the rhyme. I did find a spelling error though (hopeing)
For a first draft it's a good write...
Please visit us often. You are very important to our community.
Respectfully,
Amartya
Welcome Back
Good to see one more post from you...
Beautiful way of saying that the struggle in life is always on...
Thank you for a nice post.
hey guys
thanks ive been so busy with work i actually wrote this at work lol and its going in my next book "Of Angels and Men"
excellent... :)
Best of luck onyour next book
Let us know once it's published.
Respectfully,
Amartya
Yes, let us know when it's published
This piece has a lot going on in it. I like how it allows the reading to form her/his own opinion on which side exactly that you supporting (increase the number of people that may potentially read your book
). I really liked how you cleverly teetered on the tight rope of ambiguity. I find that to be hard to successfully pull that off all the way through a poem. This is my favorite piece from you, if I my say so. Great work, and worthy of your next book!
Best of luck
Mocit