Taken
In arms of an angel the body did lay
quiet and motionless as the angel prayed
broken is she the body i have but bringing of souls is all that you ask
onced loved by many now despaired but the soul she had has long left here
weep for her not for she is alive
in lifes only afterlife she now will abide
you to some day will have this pleasure as long as you believe in the lords after life
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Jon,
I think this is a touching write. This piece is very personal to you, i imagine. I would therefore not comment much expect for repeating the earlier observation... Break the sentences up and help your readers...
I think you are a VERY talented person... I really do... :)
Regards,
Amartya