Faith Alive Witness #2

catlover12de's picture

 Hey everyone. This is from the same camp as "Faith Alive Witness". Hoe you like it.

  • We're called to a place
  • where we all come around
  • and together we share
  • our gifts on this ground.
  • We learn about
  • our own calling and gifts
  • and we also learn
  • about other's gifts.
  • We also learn 
  • about S.H.A.P.E. through a puzzle
  • and we all learn the steps
  • through the pieces of the puzzle.
  • S is Spiritual Gifts.
  • H is for Heart's Desire.
  • A is for Assets/Abilities
  • that we all desire.
  • P is for Personality.
  • E is for Experinces,
  • which can be good or bad. God uses both
  • and shapes us through those experinces.
  • We also learned
  • that we are new creation
  • and that we can help,
  • through our gifts, God's creation.
  • With all that we've learned,
  • let's apply our skills from this.
  • My idea for that would be
  • expressing God's love through poetry, like this.
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amartya's picture

Dear De..

Welcome back..

I liked the poem for it's simplicity of thought process.. yet, the last few lines stole the show:

  • We also learned
  • that we are new creation
  • and that we can help,
  • through our gifts, God's creation.
  • With all that we've learned,
  • let's apply our skills from this.
  • My idea for that would be
  • expressing God's love through poetry, like this.

I don't know what they teach you there and I also find some of these religious teachings weird but i definitely agree with the above lines..

Well written.

Amartya

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