Light of the path
- As I walk along the path,
- the cold, cold path,
- I see a light,
- a light like no other light,
- a light that directs my way,
- that leads my day,
- that is what it is,
- a light that is His,
- the One of Creation,
- the One who rules the nation,
- the One who guides
- every human who hides
- the feeling of lostness,
- the feeling of loneliness,
- the feeling of desperation,
- at lost with his own nation.
- As I walk towards the light,
- I see in the light
- our own world,
- a new, changed world,
- where there is no desperation;
- where every nation
- comes in hope;
- where, with tragedies, we'll cope;
- where everyone has peace;
- where all hunger has ceased;
- where everyone can change the world,
- the past, and the present, world.
Style / Type:
freeform
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Language:
English
(1 vote)
you lost me in this one
seems to me that somthing is misssing from this write. I enjoyed it from begining to end but I felt cheated because I feel this write is imcomplete. The path and the light are great but when you reach the end there is no journey for me to the peace through the copeing with the tragidies, you must forgive my upfrontness but this write captured me and I believe it can be even greater with a second look.
Peace love respect.
Malik Ismail