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Success Poem

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Submitted by catlover12de on Wed, 09/30/2009 - 07:27

 Success is advancing at what you want to advance at.

It smells like the smell of your reward, Yaa-hoo!

It tastes like the best dessert, where-ever it's at.

It sounds like ..."Woo-hoo!"

It feels a sheet, a test sheet, the "who made it on the team" sheet, the sheet of "where's your success at?"

It lives at where-ever it's at. What's it? Yaa-hoo!

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Dear Catlover12de

Submitted by amartya on Wed, 09/30/2009 - 09:15.

Welcome to the Poems & Prose family, again... :)

I agree with what you said in your honest little poem. It's good that you are a child and a talented person otherwise it would be difficult not to be "politically correct" and present an un-hypocritical view of how success should feel like in reality..  Well.. we work very hard for it and it should feel great, isn't it?

Well done buddy.. keep it up..

Respectfully,
Amartya

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Hi catlover12de

Submitted by PriyaNair on Wed, 09/30/2009 - 13:06.

A very nice cute poem... It feels like you have written it from ur heart.....

KEEP WRITING...

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