Back to Me
I’m done with sorrow.
I’m done with pain.
I’m done with sappy love songs.
They no longer sing my name.
I’m free from the sadness.
I’m free from your hold.
I’m free from the misery.
My thoughts you no longer control.
I’m feeling some joy.
I’m feeling less friction.
I’m feeling ready to start life anew
Filled with love and conviction.
Style / Type:
freeform
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Language:
English
