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Submitted by G.S.Vasukumar on Thu, 05/07/2009 - 02:38
Will Power
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It’s determination to
Achieve something,
Even if it is impossible
In the eyes of others.
Even if many obstacles
Come in the way.
Even if failure grins
And seems to stay.
It’s like climbing
A steep mountain,
The fear of falling
Is always there in mind,
As the strong wind
Is pushing you behind.
Also the rope to which
You are holding
Begins to break.
It’s the will power
That gives strength
To the weak,
And who knows,
You may even
Reach the peak.

By :- GSVK

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Hi

Submitted by PriyaNair on Thu, 05/07/2009 - 02:53.

Great Thought..Simply put...Good style of poetry

These are my fav lines

And who knows,
You may even
Reach the peak.

Thanks...

Submitted by G.S.Vasukumar on Thu, 05/07/2009 - 14:41.

Priya,

Thanks for ur nice comments :)

Regards,

Vasu

 

I like your, GSVK

Submitted by Byebye on Thu, 05/07/2009 - 04:57.

I think you have a clever way of expressing yourself.  Both simplicity and complexity can be a either tiresome or brilliant.  You, I think, sway toward the later.   Thank you for sharing your poems.

 

mocit

Thanks...

Submitted by G.S.Vasukumar on Thu, 05/07/2009 - 14:44.

Hi Mocit,

Thanks for ur comment :)

Regards,

Vasu

 

 

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Vasu

Submitted by jack the ripper on Thu, 05/07/2009 - 16:29.

"And who knows,
You may even
Reach the peak."

My humble opinion:

To try until success comes. Not to even think of failure. To know that triumph will come one day for sure... These constitute determination. To be ready to fall and then get up and run with the knowledge that he may fall again and to continue to do so with the same vigor as he did the first time make a willful man.

I think perseverance and fearlessness are the qualities you are talking about and yes they are important parts of will. I know it's difficult to distinguish between these (even the creme de la creme fail at-times)... But then this is just an unimportant opinion.

Nice piece overall...

Respectfully,
Amartya