DO YOU EVEN KNOW WHAT TRUE LOVE IS OR MEANS?

Hayeema Pigat Jidwaaq's picture

How does one define TRUE LOVE...

Do you measure it based on how many times you smile...

Or do you lose on how many times you frown...

Do you measure it on how many times a person tells you the Truth...

Or do lose it when you find their Truth acute?

Do you take in note of the feelings of their heart...

Or you just say it just cause it sounds good...

Do you measure true love based on the fact that the two of you are so well understood...

Or do you lose it cause they can't meet your expectations as you think others could.

How does one measure True Love... most would say by happiness...

But doesn't True Love seem too impossible to one who is a perfectionist?

So how do you define True Love... I picture it the best way it can be defined...

That no matter the ups and downs, the twist and turns... you will always be mine.

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