HALO

Hayeema Pigat Jidwaaq's picture

Most would think a halo is that glowing ring around your head...

and it is said if you don't do right by GOD... for sure you are certainly dead...

But that halo doesn't mean that much to those full of "filth" and "sin"...

As there is an angel in the midst, believe the Devil Is also within..

Moreso about the test of will... and the willingness to submit...

Right or wrong is not the song... It's the lesson you must get...

The power of FREE CHOICE to feed one spirit or the other...

To love your brother as thyself... or just keep to yourself and screw the other...

But then again the judgement still stands true, that whatever choice you choose, the judgement is on you...

So if you're smart, ask for forgiveness and just do your part and stay stable...

And be truthful at all times, right or wrong, and watch you earn your halo.

 

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