THE REFLECTION IN THE MIRROR

Hayeema Pigat Jidwaaq's picture

Greetings to the reflection in the mirror,  how are you? Fine as one could  be...

If I didn't know any better... your looks are very familiar that I can see...

Except you have more perfect skin... and your lips are so lush...

Your hair is in perfect place... your smile can't be touched.

I love your curves, and the color of your eyes are memorzing and  so well defined...

Your forehead is shaped attractively, your cheeks are so rosy... just like the color of wine...

Your shoulders laid back... your breast uplifted...

The person in the mirror seems mighty gifted.

Why are you staring back so hard... do I not look so cute...

Are you measuring my imprection to you who is absolute..ly gorgeous!

Huuuuuhhhhh! oh how I wish.... how I wish... the reflection wasn't so mean...

And then I caught at smile... cause I just remembered that reflection in the mirror is me.

 

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