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Submitted by honey on Thu, 11/05/2009 - 13:40

watching those eyes

myself reflected in them

they no longer care

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Sad, leaves you to wondering whose eyes are they

Submitted by anaisnais on Thu, 11/05/2009 - 19:08.

or are you looking in a mirror....the mind can wonder either path depending which way you lead and both so sad....  Great write keep writing!  Anna-Marie Docherty aka anaisnais on redbubble.com writing poetry.

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but you still care! thats a

Submitted by ratnaprabha r raykar on Thu, 11/05/2009 - 23:56.

but you still care! thats a parody but so many do not realise, and still go pn

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Dear Honey,

Submitted by amartya on Fri, 11/06/2009 - 06:32.

Welcome to the Poems & Prose family of friends! 

I loved the haiku. It speaks volumes about & to the one you love. I've memorized it & am certain to use it for someone.. 

Thanks for sharing. We would love to see you comment on some of the other poems. Will be fun.

Keep writing.

Respectfully,
Amartya

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thx

Submitted by honey on Fri, 11/06/2009 - 11:04.

you are right ratnaprabha

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thx

Submitted by honey on Fri, 11/06/2009 - 11:05.

amartya thanks

ya you can use it

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Submitted by amartya on Fri, 11/06/2009 - 11:13.

If I recite it to anyone I will make sure she knows it was written by you..

Amartya

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thx

Submitted by honey on Fri, 11/06/2009 - 11:06.

anaisnais thanks for  your comment

 

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amartya

Submitted by honey on Fri, 11/06/2009 - 18:55.

lol

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