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Submitted by Icycool on Sun, 11/29/2009 - 23:13

A hundred days have made me older
Since the last time that I saw your pretty face
A thousand lies have made me colder
And I don't think I can look at this the same
But all the miles that separate
Disappear now when I'm dreaming of your face</p>

I'm here without you baby
But you're still on my lonely mind
I think about you baby
And I dream about you all the time

I'm here without you baby
But you're still with me in my dreams
And tonight it's only you and me, yeah

The miles just keep rollin'
As the people leave their way to say hello
I've heard this life is overrated
But I hope that it gets better as we go

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amartya's picture

Hi..

Submitted by amartya on Sun, 11/29/2009 - 23:31.

Nice poem but not an original...

http://my.opera.com/SerbianFighter/blog/show.dml/109655

Amartya Ray

reema's picture

hi

Submitted by reema on Mon, 11/30/2009 - 12:58.

hi nice but the sentence frame was a little bit not good.. but i can understand your feeling wht you wanted to write.

Reema..

Truth247's picture

 Hi Reema As Amartya pointed

Submitted by Truth247 on Fri, 12/04/2009 - 05:13.

 Hi Reema

As Amartya pointed out this was not written by the poster.  It is song lyrics from 3 Doors Down as posted here:

http://my.opera.com/SerbianFighter/blog/show.dml/109655

I would think the poster would have made mention of this rather than posting it as if he were the author.  That's called plagiarism.

Mark

PS Thanks for the comments you made on my original poetry. ;-)

reema's picture

hmmmm

Submitted by reema on Sat, 12/05/2009 - 10:44.

hmmmmmm i just read it okkk got it dear..

Reema..

vinita_rk's picture

hey.. this is my fav song! B

Submitted by vinita_rk on Sat, 12/05/2009 - 19:00.

hey.. this is my fav song!

B a lil original.. next time!