On his helplessness

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My heart breaks when I
look at him helplessly, cry.
The moist eye hardly disposes
mighty eternity the apathy proposes.

For his chronic dilemma knows no end
- utterly powerless to fight or defend.
For a stream of tears is all has he
to reveal his obdurate destiny.

I asked him a lot to share a thought
and bathe in the sanctity my love brought.
In vain, his reticent lips never revealed a word,
locked in his deep mind kept the overflowing discord.

Unconditional love is all I have to give
to heal a pain may be only time can conceal.
The potent weapon of hope I must never leave.
But for now I can only regret his hopelessness.

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Hi

Good One...The best thing i liked is the lavish use of Vocabulory...There are times when u cant help a friend and the best thing you could do is just let him get over his grief himself...The frustration one goes thru in times like these is well described....

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very deep

I missed this one.  I must go back and see if there are any more I missed.  This piece packs a punch.  I like this one very much.

 

mocit

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Mocit

This is a true story...

Respectfully,
Amartya

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