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Submitted by jack the ripper on Sun, 05/17/2009 - 12:33

As if I want to live
Yet detested by life.
As if I love the sunshine
In a place starved of sunrise.

The zealous quill
wants to move on
with no ink to feed
its motion.
Time spent
so passionless
helplessly counting
the karma
of my transgression.

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hi

Submitted by PriyaNair on Sun, 05/17/2009 - 12:49.

Your Poems always has a class & style of a professional.

I know u and hence i say this...Write a book.....It will be a bestseller

     Priya

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 A very mature and beautiful

Submitted by madhukar7002 on Mon, 05/18/2009 - 00:08.

 A very mature and beautiful write. I particularly loved the concluding lines.

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Thanks again mate...

Submitted by jack the ripper on Mon, 05/18/2009 - 00:15.

Madhukar,

Life is often so lifeless... This was my way of expressing it...

Respectfully,
Amartya

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