Love or lust?

jack the ripper's picture

An embrace that makes the body curl -
as of a blanket in a cold winter night.
Emotions boil in the vacant mind
when her visage deludes my sight.

Private rendezvous enthrall in pleasure
but the public ones often in displeasure;
it’s hard to tame my possessive mind
to see her passion with others bind.

A moment’s distance translates to light-years;
Separations bring my eyes to tears.
I’ve always failed to name the emotion;
is it my love or lust for this enchanting creation?

 

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vinita_rk's picture

hey

Hey,

Firstly bravo! Amazing use of words, amazing use of thoughts, amazing writing and amazing poem. I confess, I dont know why I liked this poem so much but I do accept I shall be reading this quite often, everytime I have a dilemma and trust me, that's frequent!

 

i dont know whether this is love or lust but the true romantic that I am, there is no lust, lust comes from love and so this my friend, is love!

 

 Vini

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amartya's picture

Thank you so much :)

your comments are always special. I'm glad you liked it...

Respectfully,
Amartya

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