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A tribute to Joe's will to live

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Submitted by jack the ripper on Sat, 05/30/2009 - 12:28

A venomous serpent
Lurks above my head
threatening
To bestow death.
Up on my skull
it wanders about
awaiting
My will to break.

 

Joe... You make us proud.

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may be i can continue it abit its fr u joe

Submitted by lavanya b on Sat, 05/30/2009 - 12:47.

 I stand high

facing u smiling

with a wand 

in hand.

i just flick

make u weak.

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Lavanya

Submitted by jack the ripper on Sat, 05/30/2009 - 12:54.

This is a beautiful poem... "A kiss from the godess of death" should be a good title for it...

Suggestion: Publish it as a post...

Respectfully,
Amartya

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Exquisite poetry, Amartya!

Submitted by joe on Sun, 05/31/2009 - 20:30.

Exquisite poetry, Amartya! And,  thank you, dear friend.

 

joe

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Remarkable I never was so

Submitted by joe on Sun, 05/31/2009 - 20:27.

Remarkable I never was so touched. Beatiful!

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Thanks Joe... :)

Submitted by jack the ripper on Sun, 05/31/2009 - 20:56.

Thank you So much for being such a great friend... :)

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thanx Amartya

Submitted by lavanya b on Sat, 05/30/2009 - 13:37.

 i wuld publish adding more to it 

 

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Sure Lavanya...

Submitted by jack the ripper on Sun, 05/31/2009 - 20:58.

I think yours' is a very nice piece... You must publish it... :)

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hi,    ur poem is mind

Submitted by ratnaprabha r raykar on Tue, 06/02/2009 - 13:19.

hi,

   ur poem is mind blowing

                                                    smt ratnaprabha raykar

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