The Universe

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There was an entity more trivial than dust and
there was a phenomenon called the big bang -
a force causing enormous destruction,
deplumed the entity into decimation.

The particles floated around in space.
They got caught in an eternal race -
Constantly expanding in the dark, serene sky.

This process went on for billions of years;
finally, some of these particles changed their gears
and they started colliding.

These collisions were very exothermic,
begetting a show which was fantastic.
The show engendered many galaxies,
planets, meteors and stars.
This is the story behind our Universe.

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1etincelle

thank you indeed... thanks for reading a piece of mine no one cared to read... much appreciated...

Bet I was there.... not in this form but in another.... The energy in me was, is and shall be a part of the universe... :)

Respectfully,
Amartya
 

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A relief, really

You hae a way expressing space in a most peacful, calming way; even considering cataclismic desruction of it all.  You always have a clever way ryming that I cant help but envy just a bit.

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Thank you Mocit

You are a great friend....

Amartya

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some fact

is is really good..........

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Cold Cofee....

Welcome to PoemsNProse...
Pleasure to have you with us...

I'm glad you like the poem... :)

Amartya

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