Just for her lovely eyes

Submitted by jAs on Tue, 05/05/2009 - 15:08

The most beatiful eyes....
I've ever seen.
For the second look......
I'm very keen.

I never wanna...
see her cry.
I'll definitely try....
to make her eyes dry.

I don't know...
What love is?
What feelings are?
I know from her....
I'm quite far.
I'll be her moon...
If she would be a star.

I wish.....
I could be a tear.
From her eyes....
I'll never rise.
Rather stay there........
Just for her lovely eyes.

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jAs

Submitted by jack the ripper on Tue, 05/05/2009 - 16:55.

Well written... I know of a girl with beautiful eyes too... n therefore share your feelings... Hopefully we are not talking about the same person.... LOL

Welcome to Poems N Prose dear friend...

Respectfully,
Amartya

amartya

Submitted by jAs on Wed, 05/06/2009 - 14:45.

hopes are same....

this shouldn't be the same girl....

otherwise......don't want to write.....

n yeah thanx for comment...

NEW COMER,

jaspal

jAs

Submitted by jack the ripper on Wed, 05/06/2009 - 15:32.

Don't ever think you are a new comer... Once you are with us you are as old and important a member as anyone else... This is YOUR site... You write every well...

Respectfully,
Amartya