From that moment on..............

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The moment I saw you.
The moment I touchd you.
You touched my heart,
right from the very start.
From that moment on..............

The moment we started talking.
The moment we started walking.
The moment you crossed through my eyesight.
The moment we shared our first bite.
From that moment on...............

The moments we enjoyed together.
The moments like different weather.
The moment I counted steps to your place.
The moment of farewell under dawn's glaze.
From that moment on................

The moment we shared day's last message.
Upcoming moments were more than an age.
Fighting moments with closed eyes
Which were sleepless.
Dreaming of you every moment in caress.
From that moment on.................

Moments of excpecting somethin unconditionally,
Moments of laughter, cries occassionally.
Moment- when a thought of you made a strange thing
ran through my head to toe.
Moment since this feeling started flow.
From that moment on.................
I'm in love with you!!!!!!

 

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jack the ripper's picture

jAs... it's sometimes painful and .... :)

The following statements are not personal...

Love is often painful and there is no easy pain killer available... But yes as long as the kick is on one should enjoy it... It is a beautiful feeling... And a handful of very lucky souls never come out of it. I envy them.

Its a nice love song (falling in love song may be)... Interestingly written. Since it appears to be a personal write I will not be more critical... But i did like it...

Some observations:

"The moment I touchd you." - touched
"Moment since this feeling started flow." - to flow (you missed the "to")

Respectfully,
Amartya

 

reema's picture

hi

Too many repetitions,  The phrase "The Moment " has been used many times. .. Surely tells me you are in love.