meetin on cloud 9

kalvins_a_panda's picture

 i thought the sky had fell, i had gazed so long

was lost til i seen she had her halo on
knew i was in a better place, maybe where she came from
was i still alive? good question
beauty of this kind only abides in Heaven
right? how can this be?
she had an aura that surpassed my imagining
the way her soft skin and sweet smell matched her speech
had my heart and my words panicking
streakin across my tongue, collidin and crashin
in attempt to fashion the perfect sentence
a bouquet of expression she never heard, somethin different
but was it possible in such an enchanted instant
a moment reality didnt exist in
where i stood before a princess beautiful beyond words
forgettin i was still on earth--
KG

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 your poem lifted me to the

 your poem lifted me to the clouds. the touch of suspense is the crowning glory

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kalvins_a_panda's picture

the air up there!

 hope you never come down! thanks for reading!

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clud 9

i didnt know clud 9 exprience wuld be like this .truly u have said it all and reading i was feeling ecstasy beyond anything and was hoping to have such feeling.Very gud one.

LAvanya 

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egads!

even as i wrote it, i was sinkin into the moment, myself. glad you experienced it too! thanks for reading!

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