ATTIC OF MEMORIES

   wrttien on-15 july 2011                                                                                  

                                                                                  ATTIC  OF  MEMORIES

 

A small groove

Up below the roof top.

A roomful of dirt,

Without a window

Called ATTIC.

 

Underneath a piles of dirt,

There lies a priceless box,

full of memories.

Memories lost or assumed

to be tucked in a safe place.

 

I come across that box

my heart jumps gleefully by a beat.

Hands go limp and sweaty,

While I try to open

The door to long lost things.

 

Heart swells with pride ,happiness

along with thousand wordless feelings.

A smiles lits my face ,

A song plays on on my lips.

 

I grab a paper, pencil in reach,

Put  incoherent meaningless words

forming another invaluable memory

tucked safely in a box in THE ATTIC.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Malik Ismail's picture

I really Like this write great job

 "Tucked safely" metaphore in the open the brain is the attic and the way you used memory to explain it is wide open but hidden I really like this write.

 

Malik Ismail

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thanx

I was actually going through my memories in a box so i thought to put it here.

LAvavnya

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amartya's picture

glad you did! :)

 Hi,

I'm glad you did! :) ... how is married life?

Bro,

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thnx amartya

 thanx n marriage life is going well hw abt ur bachelor degree :P?

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amartya's picture

LOL...

 Just did a phd on bachelorship ;)

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so simple yet so sweet!very

so simple yet so sweet!very good

                                                                 ratnaprabha r raykar

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