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NOTHING LASTS FOREVER

Submitted by lavanya b on Mon, 05/18/2009 - 03:03

day lasts for 24hours

week lasts for 7 days

an hour lasts for 60 minutes

a minute lasts for 60 seconds

a second lasts for 60milliseconds

a month lasts for 30 days

a year lasts for 365 1/4 days

a relation lasts till the end up sore

memory lasts till its replaced by another one

paintings lasts till it gets faded

beauty lasts until ur aged

flowers lasts till they r withered

season lasts for a period of time

nothing lasts forever its just ur good deeds r lasted for more time till they r remebered by evryone dont run at the back something just enjoy and give meaning to ur never lasting life.

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Great Thought

Submitted by loveulife on Mon, 05/18/2009 - 20:04.

Its so beautifully put across....I 100% agree with you

Change is the only constant...Today is the only reality, we should live for this moment.

I like the pattern of the poem

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Nice thought Lavanya, but the

Submitted by madhukar7002 on Mon, 05/18/2009 - 23:56.

Nice thought Lavanya, but the presentation could have been better.

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yes ur right madhukar sir

Submitted by lavanya b on Tue, 05/19/2009 - 01:51.

 i came to know abt hw to write a poem

frm the tips given by mr joesph

it wuld be very hard but will try fr my new wrk

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HI LAVANYA,

Submitted by prema_nair on Wed, 05/20/2009 - 13:47.

i like your thought process very much and yes if you work a little bit more on presentation you will make a gr8 poet.

all the best.

Prema

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Lavanya

Submitted by jack the ripper on Wed, 05/20/2009 - 14:09.

Prema has put it more sweetly than anyone else could...  ... She is like a fairy angel....

And what is needed is not difficult to achieve... I've commented in one of your other poems extensively about this... Please read it...

Respectfully,
Amartya

 

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