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3 Letters of alphabet

Combine to give a word.

It’s  RED.

 

Rose is Red,

Hot iron is Red,

 It defines power,

Freedom , lust & so on.

 

Wine is red

Has power to sedate.

Science proposes

Red can be seen clear.

 

 Blood is red.

Wine and blood, Color is red.

They differ in smell but are red.

Though they are good ,

One is spilt in celebration of other,

For pleasure of this Animal called Human.

 

Red shows terror

Thirst of power,

Future‘s destruction.

Show white to avoid red.

 

Science says BLUE is absorbed to show RED

Sun appears RED showing fierce.

Leaves show red in fall,

Opening gates for fury of white

This leads to joy of spring.

 

I speak of RED

With a vision of man

To take RED as RED

But not its need to conquer

By not stepping hopes of others.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Hi

"Red sky at night, sailors delight; red sky at morning, sailors warning"

Nice thought... Keep writing

Luv

Priya

thanx priya

 but truly i wish i could right with such an ease and rythymic, anyways ill try to be more good

Very new  way of thinking the

Very new  way of thinking the things..............Good  reading indeed..........keep it up.........awaiting more...

pritam

thanx for ur valuable comments on my wrk.

will try to post new wrk as soon as possible.

LAvanya

 

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yar its really nice , so remember me i m here after about 2-3 months , i hope u remember meee eand keep writting......

sam

yes i do remember you.

thanx for reading it and commenting on it.

Lavanya 

hmmmmmmmmmm

yar its really nice , so remember me i m here after about 2-3 months , i hope u remember meee eand keep writting......