A RENDEZVOUS WITH STREET LAMP
A RENDEZVOUS WITH STREET LAMP
Night crept slowly
Engulfing day bit by bit.
Gentle breeze brings sweet aroma.
I stroll on to known lanes,
Escorted by twilighting stars and moon.
I began my adventurous journey.
I end one path and begin another.
I approach him unknowingly.
He starts flickering to get noticed.
Glowers bright at my sight,
Showing his delight.
Dim’s his brightness as if someone sucked his light.
Colours drain from his face,
As I pace
Away from him.
I retreat my steps towards him,
Like someone cast a spell on my feet.
He stares at me ,
With his piercing bright eyes.
unsaid feelings arise from core of our hearts.
Everything around us seems to be worthless.
A mist appears to surround us.
Time encroaches slowly
And
I bid him farewell
With promises of meeting again.
I woke up from my warm bed
Amusing about my rendezvous
With
STREET LIGHT.
PS:- Relationships are like a lake where we have to drop a pebble and allow it to sink so as to measure its depth.
wow!!!!!
We definitely have something here... well articulated dream... very well done indeed... I'm sorry i could not comment on this before because, like you know, I was all busy with the launch of the chat room and my apologies for that... this definitely needs more viewing and comments...
I did find a couple of spelling mistakes though.... thought i should bring them to your notice so that this can be made into a PREFECT write...
1) crept --- there is nothing called crepts
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2) twilight --- we don't have anything called twilighting (I found it from Microsoft Word spell check myself
3)unsaid feelings arise from core of our heart.[s] --- because there are two hearts...
Apart from these... excellent work... please keep writing...
Respectfully,
Amartya
Amazing!
Hey Lavanya,
Amazing work... Really went with the flow, I too became a part of the rendezvous as I read the poem.
Keep writing!
Vini
hey thanx
Amartya
yea was angr upon evry1 coz noone posted b4 i left fr vacation i even havent shwn to my cousins hahaha
thanx will try to share such fantasies with u all this way definitely.
Vinita
im so happy just ffloating in air
to make u involve in the poem thanku very much frnds
:)
its always a pleasure to read ur poems
Amartya