THE KITE

 

 

A scissor, a paper, a stick and glue

It comes from trash heap,

Mould into an art piece.

Passes from hand to hand

Never loosing hope

 holding its only WISH.

 

 

Sails the greatest voyage,

 

only support as HOPE.

Lifts its tail directing the path

Cuts, dives, leaps and falls.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Head up and always eyes upon

 

                                          HORIZON.

Looks behind and gets a glimpse.

Desserts winds for an unknown journey.

When it looks past

Dread comes much fast.

 

 

 

 

 

 

String seems the same

 

But

A new master trying hard

To make to fly it in his way

It frets, dives with aggression

To get cut loose,

Grip tightens around it.

Tears spill in vain.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sky roars, thunder strikes

 

It adrift in dream

Afloat in warm air

Stroking its tired lips

Smile arouses

AS

Sun rises from heart of earth.

 

 

 

 

 

 

New dream & new path.

 

Hands itself to new master

BUT

With one destiny

To reach PEACE.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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such a nicely written poem!

such a nicely written poem! congratulations! such nice thoughts indeed.

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thanx

 i can say only one word sir thanx a lot but i have to complain sir u shuld also critic the wrk right and i know it has flaws but by saying so i might not commit them.

 

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lavanya

u never miss to amaze us.....

great work!!!

 

jAs

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jas

 thats great to hear from u dear.

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Grt work

Well, jus read ur first post and fell in love with the usage and blend of words...

Nice thought and great execution

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j walia

Happy to see ur appreciation and thanx for reading it dear.

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