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Submitted by leannlaughlove on Thu, 02/25/2010 - 04:44

The soft thump
As my fingers slowly drum.
I'm left waiting,
Anticipating.
Did you forget
I'm still here?
Waiting for your letter
To appear.
Do you remember
I'm still alive?
Waiting for your letter
To arrive.
Do you know
I'm still breathing?
Waiting for that letter
I'm desperately needing.
I'm still here...
Waiting.

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 a nice one, sweet are the

Submitted by ratnaprabha r raykar on Sun, 03/14/2010 - 22:27.

 a nice one, sweet are the pleasures of waiting

:)

Submitted by leannlaughlove on Tue, 03/23/2010 - 06:35.

Thank you! :)

really sweet 1:)

Submitted by riya on Wed, 03/24/2010 - 22:32.

 aww anoder gud 1..:)...keep gng on..u r on a roll;)

Thanks.

Submitted by leannlaughlove on Fri, 03/26/2010 - 08:27.

Thanks so much! :)