On waters once mine.
On waters once mine.
Fall ripples of rain on a river fend pond.
Circles of change intersect; become one.
Wavelets collided, worries subside.
Lively waters since still lifeless lay…
Calmed by cool rays of causation;
Reactions fulfilled.
From a moon of pale fire
called “Destinies Chill”.
With billowing breezes across
Space and time.
To stand on frozen waters.
And breathe in the vapors so fine.
To stand on dry land…
Steadily digging
with shovel in hand.
And uncover the treasure
Of the life we had planned.
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really a meaningful
really a meaningful poem..
wow! here all the poets r indeed poets, every poem here speaks from its heart. i wish i cud reach the levels the poets here have achieved.
gr8 writing. good luck..
hi loco
wow, now thats true poetry. it was quite a Bang on after 'the fallacy of heart.' like i have said b4 i rate a poem on the basis of how i feel after reading it & i loved it. the poem was like those mysterious rivers which look shallow from outside but once you step inside it takes you to its great unknown depths. so many truths & fantasies of life wrapped up in 3 paragraphs. commendable.
Keep Writing
thanks,
Prema
Absolutely Beautiful
Very well done! I believe this is very well structured with a surprize ending that made me shift quickly into a far deeper place of relvery. Way to end it! Gave me chills.
Mocit