Sleeping Dogs

In my closet, books-
Dog-eared, moth-eaten,
Faded print, yellowing words,
A touch turns
Brittle pages to dust,
That slips through my fingers.</p>

In the closet of my mind, memories-
Of brittle, moth-eaten times,
Like sand, if only they would slip away-
Though hidden deep down
If dusted off, where would I run,
Its best to let some sleeping dogs lie.

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jack the ripper's picture

Madhukar... LOL... so true

I loved the use of metaphor... Metaphors make a poem special...

I also liked the idea... "Its best to let some sleeping dogs lie."

The LOl was for that...

Well written...

do keep writing...

Respectfully,
Amartya

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Thanks a lot, Amartya for the

Thanks a lot, Amartya for the constant support.

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If dusted off, where would I

If dusted off, where would I run,

Its best to let some sleeping dogs lie.

 

 those 2 lines were very gud ,poetry is asusal very gud one .i luved it .but i have a doubt

 does  dusted off indicates to forget those past incidents ?

 

its best to let some sleeping dogs lie.

does it means its better to leave some memories not to be disturbed as they might get erased completely r esle they might raise some trouble points in our life?

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Thanks Lavanya for the read.

Thanks Lavanya for the read. I'm sorry but I couldn't really understand your question. Could u pls rephrase it?

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hi

WOW!!!!

that was really nice.  very well written poem and very wise thoughts. i liked it a lot. only a few ppl have dis rare gift of expressing their thoughts so beautifully & u r definetly one of them. thanks for the poem.

Keep Writing

Prema

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